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Prologue

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Once there used to be balance in this world.
There were beasts of night, hunting the weak and poor, those foolish enough to walk the paths absent of light, and courageous men, both guards of their kin and annihilators of abominations.
At times, the hunter became the hunted. At times, the prey became the predator.
A crude form of mutual coexistence. Or so it seemed.

Centuries ago, due to circumstances unknown, the numbers of forces threatening mankind rapidly increased, while the guards and hunters vanished. Almost overnight the long kept balance was shaken, darkness enveloped the world, and mankind was driven behind their fragile borders. Whole villages were overrun by ravenous creatures, those who didn't fall in an unequal battle fled to the cities. If they reached them, that is.
In those times of turmoil, many died, even more lost their home and wealth, and were forced to live in the now densely populated cities.
Each night, the people built walls of fire. Each night, the beasts tore them down.
Many times, men set out to fight the beasts, mere peasants with pitchforks and torches, unknowing of the methods of the guards and hunters that once faced the menace. Many times, none of them returned.
But not all of the old huntsmen were gone. There were still skilled men out there who knew how to oppose the creatures of night. Though severely diminished, those men formed a guild where they gathered knowledge long thought lost on how to battle the various monstrosities encountered in the absence of light.
However, people, bitter and worn out from their loss, the deaths of their beloved and the constant fear of darkness, distrusted the guild and their ominous members that often looked quite beastly themselves.
Instead of assisting the guild and fighting what threatened their very own lives, people relied on hiding in their heavily barricaded homes throughout the night, with hearts full of fear.

So the guild remained an outcast lot, beasts, ghouls and other horrors kept ruling the night, and the balance seemed lost forever, with mankind on the losing end.

But there was a boy.
A descendant of a hunter.
And when that boy became man, he would set out on a journey to reforge the guild and restore the balance.
The prophecy had been foretold, and his fate was cast in stone.
I would like to remember all of you that I'm not a native English speaker and any form of correction or criticism is appreciated :)
If you see any strange formulations, please point them out, it helps me learning :)

A story is forming in my head that is so heavily inspired by Castlevania: Lords of Shadow and Bloodborne it cannot be legal...
My mind is too susceptible to anything morbid and gothic-y...


Edit: Many thanks to :iconokami11: who proofread it and made some corrections!! I appreciate it! :aww:

The Prophecy:  Fragments of the ProphecyAnd the Time will come
when Paths of Light are covered in Darkness
the Streets forlorn and desolate
every Human Heart is filled with Fear
and Hope has long since been forgotten.
And when the Bloodmoon rises
and a Pact is made
then the Forces will be reassigned
and Mankind meets its Fate.
Thou seest,
the Master of the longclawed Beasts
Thou seest,
the bloodspoiled Queen of Shadows
Thou seest,
the Lord of ghostly Faeryfolk
Thou seest,
the Dark Angel that fell from the Heavens.
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woodoo26's avatar
Most interesting! I see your storytelling has quite a specific frame and direction, although there's a hint of uncertainty of how the plot will continue, a fog that lingers in the writer's mind, making the writing part a thing of adventure. I'm not so good at telling stories, my topics are not amusing at best, but I try to spice up things enough to make it readable, and enough as I can as I'm not a native English speaker either. My advice (if you can call it that at all) is to read as much as you can and try to use the vocabulary to enhance the mood of the story. Use words that comply to the visual and emotional pictures you are painting. The ones that represent the setting you're trying to create. I guess you already have the rough storyline, try enhancing it with some atmosphere :) Your English is great (by my standards, at least), let it fly as your imagination does!